Comments : A Bitter Ending

  • 10 years ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    I remember saying a while back that you gave up on this website, im glad you put this up. your so talented, and i could honestly pay you no compliment you probably havent already heard. but here goes: this was so beuatiful and honest and great, you are such a talented writer, your poems are one of a kind and wonderful. nice job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Iyla

    I loved it. 5/5 best wishes. keep writing please =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    Yeah.. A bitter ending !!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    I always find a reflection of myself in your word my lady...
    beautiful poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow this is amazing. Wonderful job

  • 8 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    You are nothing more than my deepest memories..
    my favorite line. i love it, very deep aura and captivating..

  • 8 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    The whole poem is awesome. Sad words used perfectly to make one sad yet beautiful poem. For sure Ill be coming back to read more from you. Great.

  • 7 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    -sigh- I can relate to this. Some people just don't know when to stop. They think just because you forgave and let them back in once, you're like a revolving door.

  • 7 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Beautifully written... Great job

  • 7 years ago

    by Jade

    "Cold summers and bittier winters
    Swirl inside your soul"

    That's my favourite bit. Well written and similar to how I write too..