Comments : Square One

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Somehow i find this a very inspirational one...Some great words with profound thoughts behind...

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I think this is a simple write that all of us can relate to on some level.

    "Took the wrong road so many times, I adjusted to the pain.
    Bad decisions. Wrong crowd. Flighty and carefree
    That was me"

    ^A road we all take, of course in our own ways, but so true.

    I like the progression of the piece as well, while many would dwell on all the bad things that have happened, you have made us believe that starting over and truly living is possible if we want it, we just have to go back to square one. Nice work.