Well i did like the poem. I mean the flow was perfect and most of your rhymes were great and never seemed forced. But the whole idea of the poem seems cliche and overdone. But still a well written peice. 5/5

This poem really hit home for me, and i can truly relate. Its an emotional write that im sure alot of people are going to understand and relate to. Though you did another really excellent job with this poem. 5/5

Great poem, wonderful...
It has a heartbreaking story to it, it left me in tears... It's odd you mentioned how society and family help in keeping dangeorous secrets away from people, but it is a truth everyone should aknowledge... because that way we can create a better society, instead of judging people by their problems we could solve them... not make them worse by adding shame to them... after all everyone has problems.

Wow. you did a great job. i love this write. it was beautiful.