Comments : Fragile wings

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Aahhh yes..memories, tears and reasons,
    they are always there to hamper our thoughts. Liked the read as well as the title :)

  • 14 years ago

    by LenaLee

    Liked the title. :)

    I didn't really like the way you kept repeating words that rhymed with "by" (since it made the flow of the poem worse), but overall it was nice.