You're a sweetheart and I enjoyed writing this with you. We seemed to connect and the words just flowed. Thank you and a bunch of hugs
Jimmy

Nice seamless collab. Well done to both of you.

Really beautiful work, this collab...I am impressed!

I could not tell it was done by two people, not at all..

God bless:)

5/5 Ingrid

Amazing poem!.so well written.

Still remember the first day
^'I' is missing before still

A really great write the both of you. Unique and well done on both parts. Nice to see you two doing a collab together.

A lovely write done by you both..well done,
liked the read :)

Wonderful collab...so full of passion. The two of you did great!
Take Care
Cindy

A GREAT COLLABORATION VERY VERY SENSUAL YET TASTEFUL WITH AND EASY TO READ METER AND ITS FLOW PULLS YOU IN. 5/5 RAY

Two people writing with one voice, to create one feeling. you were both well in sync. it was a bit saucy in the middle >_>

it may have just been me, but it threw me off a bit how some lines are cut short and the next line picks up where it left off.

but it still deserves a 5/5 for all it describes and the feeling it illuminates.

nice job guys
~Ben

"Intoxicated I've become a slave
to desire, a puppet that your bare
essence controls at will.
Unable to break the silken ties
of your sultry web Unwilling
to deny these lips your flavor."

Love this stanza.. very well written and amazingly put together. Well structured. Love it, nice write =)

Thanks for the comment on my poem. Great job with urs tho i had to read it two time jus cuz iz dat good keep up the good work so wen eva i get on i can read. im add u to ma fav list.

I really like how you wrote this one...it is really good i give it a 5

And this is your last poem posted wow. you have come a long way the wording the style is more formed. wow you should be pride of how far you come