Comments : A Smile (Waltz Wave)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    You did a wonderful job with the form. I love the babies smile.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Its the innocence of a baby's smile thats makes it so captivating and memorable... you have so beautifully described it... and loved the form too... will surely give it a try :)
    very sweet poem Sylvia.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Sylvia this is really a nice format, and you penned it perfectly. There is nothing more precious then a baby's smile or more joyous then their laughter.

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Lovely and very fresh Sylvia. 5/5. Walah

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is so cute, you are absolutely right, a babies smile is very precious :] Really cute.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    An awesome poem! I love it Sylvia :) You did excellent with the format... an a cute write too! Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this form very much and you did very
    good keeping the flow. I also like the topic..
    babies they surely are a treasure!

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    What memories they left embeded in our hearts and minds.Another beautiful and enjoyable read.
    Paul...