Comments : Memory Lane

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Thanks for the walk down memory lane this morning. Brought back times in my childhood. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    What a beautiful piece you have penned. How we miss those days gone by as we age. Simple times when all we did was dream and play.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Raj,
    What a nostalgic piece you have created here and in a form I have not seen myself. Very nice and definitely an enjoyable read. You have such a way of weaving magic into everything you create. I love your mindset throughout this piece as it gave it wonderful imagery. Awesome stuff.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Raj
    You did a perfect job on a really nice form. Excellent

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    First of all I really loved the form, I have never seen it before but now I must try it! Excellent work, my favorite line was probably 'rusted memories' - this line really stood out to me among the rest, although each one was written wonderfully. Absolutely well written. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A trip down memory lane..its freedom to be
    carefree. Like the form too..must try it :)
    Good job!