Wow thats a beauty... a colorful treat... dawn could have never looked so lovely as it is picturised thorugh your words...

//Fair Aurora,
Paints her sky with brush strokes of amethyst
//
lovely lines...

A sea of opal pours through gates of sleep
Pearly clouds gather like foam on timeless waves
As she pushes back the night on her turquoise tide

^^enchanting blend of colors... so wonderfully penned...

very beautiful write :)

My favorite time of day, a new dawn which you have described wonderfully. Well done.

Very unqiue and vivid descriptions... a beautiful image yourve created for us. Nicely done, (:

Simply beautiful. A colorful picture you have
drawn for the mind to see..loved this read!

Randy
You painted such a vivid picture for the minds eye. I felt like I was there watching.
Excellent job!
Take care
Cindy

Your love for the constellations and nature is very evident in this poem. Lovely write. Congratulations on your win.

Take Care,
Kay

Thank you for all your kind words. This is something I wrote last year after gazing at a beautiful Florida dawn.

Congrats on the win Randy :)

Congrats!!! Well deserved!
:]

Picture painting imagery. I like the personification. Congratulations on the well deserved win!

Wow... the way you described this!!!

looking forward to reading more.

my favorite part

A sea of opal pours through gates of sleep
And pearly clouds gather like foam on timeless waves