Olwin, the pain in your words comes through strongly. Your faith in God with see you through these trying times. Well done.

A genuine write from the heart and soul of your self. Wonderfully penned and sad.
Hang tough , God does work things out

Olwin
This is so sad. The pain is felt through your words.

Can't take much more, yes Im walking a fine line,
Won't he ever, release me?
Or am I to be forever in his grasp,
Till there's no more of me...

Remember no one can steal your thoughts...they belong only to you. Good things happen to good people...and you have a heart of gold.
Take care
Love Cindy

Sad piece indeed. Whoever that is, they are probably not worth your tears.

I hope this is just an imaginary poem. And if it isn't, girl, stop the cryin and start the tryin.. 5/5

Thankyou all so much for your very kind comments... Lolol.

Loved the emotion of the poem although it would be a smoother read and even better with some different punctuation, for example;

It's a fine line that I'm travelling today,
Lord help me make it through
these tears that I shed as I drive along
the road and cry to you.

Minor stuff but it really helps the reader get the flow of the poem. Still a very good poem though.

This is sad but the words just capture me!

I understand what your feeling!

=] Good job keep it up!

I could hear the pain in your voice as I read
this..its very sad & it leaves us the readers in
a helpless situation...I hope God helps you
find a way..take care.

Very deep but also beautiful. 5/5, Em