I understand that this poem was coming from a heart full of love as it was expressed calmly and without any pretense.

However, i would like to point out some areas where i think some changes are necessary. This is just my opinion though:-)

And so I give thanks to you and bare my soul to you,
As with out you I would have no soul as I would be dead
^^The repetition of "you" was actually not necessary here.

In fantasy I can see your angelâ??s wings,
You are my lifeâ??s anchor and my steadfast home,

^^Please recheck the foreign font :D

Overall, This was a cute dedication and a sweet note to someone special.

The only thing I have to say that she's pretty lucky to have someone who expresses there love the way you do. The way you describe the love and the affection you have are profound and deeply touching. Well written. 5/5