I loved it! Keep it up!

My ... an exquisite piece.... full of emotions , that you so well expressed with your words. A talented write! Well done :)

Sad memories can tear our hearts apart and we tend to relive them like reading the pages of a dairy. Well done.

Anthony
What a very sad emotion filled piece.

Silently sitting, staring into the void
shards of yesterday flash the mind
emotionless and numb, frozen in place
minutes turn to hours as the memories
like uninvited guests refuse to take their leave.

The memories that seem to break our hearts over and over again seem to be the ones that find us when we are most vunrable.

Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

I loved this. cannot really comment more because this poem seems perfect the way it is. I mean what i said, it's not flattery.

5/5.

Silently sitting, staring into the void
shards of yesterday flash the mind
emotionless and numb, frozen in place
minutes turn to hours as the memories
like uninvited guests refuse to take their leave.

I like this verse very much..memories can be
happy & at the same time painful to hold onto..a very sad write, take care.

This is truly wonderful. Written beautifully with alot of emotion and intriguing words. Loved it, 5/5. Em