Awww such a nice poem :) I love how simple this is and how well it flows. I think your dad would be proud of this piece. I can telly uo put alot into this. Good to see you writing more. Keep it up deary :) Nik

Straight from the heart, I loved this piece dedicated to someone in your life who will never leave you. Thank you for reminding us about those special people in our life and your own father will be very proud of you!

Thanks for sharing this heartwarming piece!

God bless you and Merry Christmas!

~MaryAnne

Aww, this was good. i know that feeling of having an unfinished poem. maybe perhaps you should write some more about your dad. in stead of writing 1 big poem about him, write several medium sized. and they could all be about something different about him. ^_^

anyway, thanks for sharing
~Ben

That was cute! it reminds me of my poem you commented on :) nice job