What a brilliant write. Though the idea of sacrificing oneself for a loved one or a friend can be sometimes interpreted as cliche, i think you have not demonstrated it here as such. You expressed extreme appreciation and care for that person.

5/5.. Countess

Not sure which friend you wrote this for but it is nice to feel this way about doing things for them and absorbing their pain.

Nicely done. Friendships are strong bonds if they are real

A friendship poem that is from the heart. Well written and expressed Temps.

To know there is someone in your life willing to take a bullet for you, is sometimes the one thing that can keep you going, girl.

Show this poem to the oned you dedicated it too, I am sure he/ she will be thrilled:)

Well done and God bless:)

5/5 Ingrid

This is what friendship is all about, feeling
the pain, joy & sadness of the other that you
will do whatever it takes to see them smile..a
touching write.

Lovely poem... what not we would do for our loved ones... bullets pain everything we would take

beautifully narrated :)