Your rhyme and flow is excellent. I like the tone of the poem, mystical.
Very enjoyable

Thank you for your comments, Quiet Insanity. I wrote this one after gazing at the star Betelguese (in Orion),

You have given the star a character and I
liked the images your poem created..very
mystical..a lovely read :)

Not a bad thing to talk to the stars. (smiles) You have created vivid images with your words and as said before a magical, mystic feeling. Well done.

Woh... what a write. A wonderful piece from your pen Randy. You never fail to satify with your wonderful nature poems :) So mytsic ... yes :) And enchanting. Just loved it. Excellent.

Thank you for your kind comments, Meena, Sylvia, Gabriel and Olwin. We should all meet sometime, somewhere under a starlit sky to write some poetry!

Oh what a wonderful write. You always keep me spellbound with poetry of the stars. It seems as though the bases would be covered with a couple of poems on stars and such, but you have a way of bringing the magic to them they deserve. The magic of the universe is woven in your words. Awesome Job!
Take Care,
Kay

Oh poet of the night... How fitting your name! smiles. I have followed you here my poet friend... And now I am content. I shall share my works too. But yours are spell-binding!

I only thought that the second line was a touch rough. Otherwise...a mastery!

Hugs...Mari

Thank you all for your kind words!

Wonderful but unusual poem. By unusual I mean it's not often that a poem so full of vibrant imagery also raises questions about mortality and time. Excellent!