by Skyfire Oct 23, 2009
category :
Fun, humor /
relationships
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O Love, how ardent be |
by Kuro
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You have quite the variety of vocabulary! i'm pleased and amused to see them used, a very well done job. however, in some places your variety of vocabulary seemed very verbose, though it did make for a very enjoyable read. |
by Kurt
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Ha! This is well written. Great job. |