Tic Toc..reminds me of AL PAcino's Movie called 88 minutes..the villain was always sayng this in an attempt to scare him..

I think this poem has potential..I loved the way it was worded, simple though portraying a powerful emotion...I must say, creatively done oo..

Very nice.. puts alot of pictures in my head.. the way you ended it was strong.. leaves an opening for maybe another?!

I felt a lot of emotion when I read this poem.
I don't know if you meant it to be that way but amazing job!

WOW - Great work - MATT now you are one of my favorite poets...

5/5
biya

Great write 5/5

Wow! great poem. I felt the frustration coming throught the words

I love this Hun, what an amazing and natural flow that's consistent throughout the whole poem, you are an amazing writer and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems.
5/5
take care
xkimx

Too many people understand this piece at various points in their life. In fact I know a few people closer to it now than they should be, I mean than I wish they were. You really described them all too well. Great job of penning your heart out here. And you did an excellent job of using repetition without it being too overwhelming.