Comments : Tic Toc

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Tic Toc..reminds me of AL PAcino's Movie called 88 minutes..the villain was always sayng this in an attempt to scare him..

    I think this poem has potential..I loved the way it was worded, simple though portraying a powerful emotion...I must say, creatively done oo..

  • 14 years ago

    by LadyLk

    Very nice.. puts alot of pictures in my head.. the way you ended it was strong.. leaves an opening for maybe another?!

  • 14 years ago

    by pixie

    I felt a lot of emotion when I read this poem.
    I don't know if you meant it to be that way but amazing job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Biya

    WOW - Great work - MATT now you are one of my favorite poets...

    5/5
    biya

  • 13 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great write 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    Wow! great poem. I felt the frustration coming throught the words

  • 12 years ago

    by kimara4955

    I love this Hun, what an amazing and natural flow that's consistent throughout the whole poem, you are an amazing writer and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems.
    5/5
    take care
    xkimx

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Too many people understand this piece at various points in their life. In fact I know a few people closer to it now than they should be, I mean than I wish they were. You really described them all too well. Great job of penning your heart out here. And you did an excellent job of using repetition without it being too overwhelming.