Comments : Earthen burial

  • 9 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...I loved this poem. I just wrote a dark poem with a friend and this was just like it. I got such a dark and eerie feeling from it. Your diction is amazing and I love how creative your imagery is. I felt like you had a good balance between your emotions as well as your style. Nothing overpowered the other, if you know what I mean lol. I think you did a good job with the story line and I enjoyed this from start to finish. Nice work hun :) Nik

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    I liked this. The first line got my attention right away. And the rest didn't let me go. Thoughts and imagery came to me with every line. A very good wright. Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    I agree to the person above...
    huhu i wish i can make a piece like this, i admire you for having unique style.. the way you made this piece is great from bottom to top..

    5/5 later i will read some more...
    ^^

  • 9 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Personally I am no great liker of dark poetry as this earth holds to many beautiful and joyous things for it to grab me and after reading such poems I always feel sorry for its writer as there is so much more in joy than wallowing in the darkness.
    So as you requested I broke my usual back turning and read it several times and the poems make up is outstanding though I have read many similar poems this is perhaps one of the best it kept my attention and finished with excellence well done 5/5 Ray S

  • 9 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is beautifully written, I really enjoyed reading it and the emotion you put into the piece was very strong =]

    I also think the flow was carried through each stanza perfectly and the rhyming is very good, your chioce of wording is also perfectly suited and the whole piece overall was very creative =]

    This is honestly one of the best poems I have read on this site in a while, brilliant work

  • 9 years ago

    by Nee

    That was a good read :)
    though the rhyme went forced on some parts.
    Well done!
    Write on~

  • 9 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I usually try and avoid dark poems because they tend to be the same among this sites users, but this one was done quite well. I loved the flow and imagery they were both done fantasticly. The poem stayed strong throughout and the ending was perfect. Great job 5/5 GG23

  • 9 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    Very bright with imagery, yet dark with emotion.
    This was a brilliant write.
    Awesome dude, 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kristina

    I'm not so much into dark poems, but this was good. I think you wrote it very well and put a lot of thought into it. Great job! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Hmm... the images i got with this poem were kinda disturbing but painful if that makes sense to you i mean i felt alot of the emotion you put in to this and it was a great write and i enjoyed it but it has me thinking but i guess thats a good thing

  • 9 years ago

    by Taz

    :(
    i only can say amazing lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    An instant Classic! One of my Favs!