This was beautiful. The imagery was impeccable, the transitions between stanzas basically seamless and the rhythm was flawless. Truly well done. 5/5.

This flowed and the word usage was simple, but effective. Another great write!!

Very beautiful piece.
Take care
Cindy

Little boy now turn your eye,
For the world mustn't see you cry

^^

You used such beautiful language, but for some reason the two lines above really did it for me. It tugged at my heart string big time....

What a beautiful poem, I am really impressed!

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Beautiful, 5/5. Em

This is indeed a lovely yet a touching poem to read. The flow of this piece took me right through the end..enjoyed the read :)