Our One Shadow

by Fran   Nov 1, 2009

The last days of summer, a
First night of passion.
The september moon finds our
One shadow beneath the now deserted pier.
The evening is warm like your breath
On my kneck, stirring me within.

Your electric kisses melt any resistance
As the waves break on the beach,
Take me, break me, I am yours.
Your lips biting, caressing my nipples
Send shock waves to my moist core and
I am ready for you.

Now we are one, pulsing like the stars,
The waves crashing on the beach,
Breaking, crashing, thrashing, aching,
Drowning my moans of pleasure and pain,
The bitter warm spray now on my lips.

Take me, break me, I am yours.


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  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this was such a passionate and sensual poem. You've expressed something very beautiful. Well done

  • 14 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Hey Fran have you been peeking at my scrapbook? just reminds me of last Summer ahhhh What a Summer,lol,...xp Lovely work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jackie

    A good poem, 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Close to home, this is..both for the wording and also the scene it describes..I have written something very similar in the past, about making out under the boardwalk in the middle of the day, ha ha.

    Outdoor fun can be so exciting, eh?

    Well written, it was a delight to read you!

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid