Nicely Done, Bravo!!!

Tempted be the temptress, behold then words so sweet it makes her heart of stone mild and meek.

"Promises are just trinkets of deception ,
cleverly crafted with no hidden exceptions.
Love a mere interlude, inflamed fascination,
attraction seldom more then sweet temptation."

I think the last line you meant than instead of then. :P Just a little grammar picky girl, I know. Haha.

5/5

-Heather

Short and sweet yet very true good job

This was amazing. It's is a true writer who can have such an emotional impact in such a short stanza. I would love it if you could check out some of my new writes...i am interested to know what you think :)

I totally agree :)

Short but to the point.

Good job!

Amazing. :)