Comments : Help Me

  • 14 years ago

    by Tammi

    This is a very powerful poem and it tells of ur story sad and true for so many girl have to face this everyday not just u and I know u will b ok and hope u get the help u need to get past this and I know it will not b easy 5/5

    Tammi,

  • 14 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    With a smile i pretended to be somebody else.
    But its at the stage im losing hope,
    Im giving up, i cant seem to cope.

    no comment cause it was a poem and comment it self , 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Wow!! i didn't know you were going through this love :( it's a great poem, one of your best i'd say, but so sad to read coz i care about you so much. i love the flow and great word choice, i hope you can get better and want to do it for yourself, because you are a great girl and i want you to heal :) 5/5 because it's so relatable and so well written
    take care xxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    But you all listen, but you dont hear,
    And you may watch, but you dont see,
    So im going to make it very clear....
    I HAVE DEPRESSION AND ITS KILLING ME.

    This is the best part in the whole poem the flow was way perfect and it gets a 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    Wow, that was sad hon. good job though. 5/5 always. best writer. ox love you. stay strong.

  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    This was a very strong poem... The flow was great & your wording was done quite well it was a little of beat in a few places but if red in a certain flow it didnt show too much.
    I really enjoyed it.

    wishing you the best hun xx

  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow, i loved this! I can relate, depression is hard to go through. Great poem, well written. great job.
    pm me if you ever wnt to chat