Comments : Breaking my own heart

  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Awesome flow. perfect actually. this piece
    just keeps flowing from one word to the next
    rhyming is really good too . I wish I could
    keep a poem singing like you do 5/5
    as far as the content we all live with regrets
    the secret is to learn from our mistakes
    and try to not do it again. One of my quotes
    applies here < only a fool breaks its own
    heart>

  • 14 years ago

    by SYLA

    I can relate to what you are or were going through.
    love can be a pain :( sad to say.
    but we cant live without, and we cant live with it.
    ya know.

    --Syla