Well good job first of all it was good i really like the imagery you brought out with the simple things caressing your cheek the porch lights its good but something feels off i can feel that there was feeling and thought put into this but theres no real strong passion behind the feelings its kind of empty. i mean please take no offens it could just be me and it was a great work 5/5

While I liked the entire poem, what I found most appealing was the first stanza.

Winter fades and spring sets in,
The smell of the air is intoxicating,
While love an passion are growing thin,
A pain settles in my heart, I'm waiting.

You utilized lots of antithesis here, juxtaposing winter with spring, and pain in ones heart with the pleasure one would assume arises from having love in ones heart. The contrast between winter and spring conceptually creates a dichotomy between death (winter), and rebirth (spring). I enjoy that very much.

The change of seasons is a momentous, significant event in the year. This poem too protrudes from the large majority of what I've read, and earned a 5.

"Grief of words past written on invisible walls"
That was my favorite line by far. Loved this poem as with many others of yours. The imagery was fantastic here, and your metaphors were connected and strong.
Thanks for this!

Wow. truly amazing. bravo!! i especially love the last stanza how you tied everything back to the mist beyond the falls. i especially like ur description with "cherry cheeks" instead of the usual cliche "rosey red cheeks" or something like that. very nice 5/5!

Great abab rhyme and flow the imagery and emotion is delivered so well in this romantic poem

The flow was perfect and the Imagery made me feel like i was there. The last stanza was like perfect, it tied everything up in a nice little bow.
very nice 5/5

I agree with Cris the flow of tis was flawless abd really makes this easy to read. I'm gonna have to start calling you the master of love lol. I never read any love poems as in depth as yours. You are really good at expressing your feelings in a new and refreshing way. I love the title. I love the imagery. I loved everything about this piece. I sense another winner with this one hun, Kepp blowing me away with these amazing poems. :) Nik

Yet love still flows like freshly melted creeks,
The sound almost as angelic as your voice,
I rub my hand across your cherry cheeks,
Wanting to stay, afraid its not my choice.

That was the stanza I enjoyed the most... Love your style of writing, the rhyme was awesome... Very very well worded poems right here...

A beautiful face appears in the dark calm of night,
Warm breezes caress me like your gentle breath,
I can see through the mist, so close yet not quite,
Life without you the one thing worse than death.

Later this stanza captured my attention... I just can relate to it... Love the vivid imagery of this poem...

Among your five latest poems, this title captured my attention the most!!!