Comments : Heartless

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    All to often, I love you is said because it is expected of the person, not because they mean it. Those people are heartless. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I definately agree with you that "I love you" is way to meaningless now a days. Guys say it to sleep with girls and girls say it because they want their relationship to be perfect like their favourite show "One Tree Hill" or some shit haha Nice work though 5/5 for sure. "fake terms to get behind clothes" that was the best possible way to say that.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nik
    Nice job on this piece. False love is just about every where we look. When you find that one person you knonw is your true love. Hold on to that love and treasure it always.
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    I like how you open up your poem with your 1st stanza. I agree with what you're trying to say. 'I love you' has been overused too many times, sometimes even used as a trap to lure one to 'give in'.I must say that what i like the about this poem is that how you view it from a different perspective. Instead of having someone to shower you with beautiful words, you just want someone to tell u something ordinary, and that to you is special. I really enjoyed this poem very much. Keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This one reflects your flare for delivering honest emotion at any cost
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 14 years ago

    by fakesmile

    Thank you so much for writing this poem! great concept! its simple and yet profound

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    I really love that its a direct poem and its completely relatable sadly :(
    Really great poem tho 5/5