Woah this is an amzingly written poem, the flow was great and rhyme scheme was perfect 5/5

Wow, this is amazing. The only thing I could say about it is the last ine in the first stanza might go a little better if you just wrote 'were left unspoken' other than that, brilliant. 5/5, Em

Wow...this is really a great write. The simplicity worked for the particular poem. It flowed well and ur rhyme scheme wasnt forced. Loved the ending, very sad write, but you did a great job. 5/5

I'll give you my hand, just reach out and take it.
A great write, don't give up.

Honey;
It's Beautiful __
*Tear*

It's good, sad but good :( 5/5 girl!