Comments : Games

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Talk about immaturity right. I know one too many people that hold grudges for no reason, and they are stupid ones. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Games :( Classic b/s
    Great poem Sylvia. Something that should have been said

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The very last line of this poem is one I have used in one of my poems: To turn the other cheek on a lost brother....

    Many on here claim to be Christians, yet they do not act upon it. I find myself withdrawing more and more from the net..it is a place filled with little people, who seem to have no other goal in life but to bring others down and find great joy in hurting them.

    Well said;)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I liked this Sylvia. Short but holds a very powerful message. Love the diction :) wonderful work. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    Love the word play with the old childrens games...I remember my sisters and I avoiding all the cracks ...LOL....but as we grow older...it is time to put up the childish ways. Sometimes saying nothing is the best solution.
    Good job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A wise message for all to follow & is written
    very well. I liked this very much!

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I really like the message you convey throughout this poem. It's one of my favorite. 5/5, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    AMEN!!