Comments : Little Girl (Alive yet Dead)

  • 14 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow that's an awesome poem. It's very sad.

    Soda <3

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, very emotional, beautiful & impressive. Written nicely, with an excellent flow, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good poem, well done. deep emotion and its alays sad losing the child within when she hasnt been happy. you have wrote about this well.

    good work xx

  • 14 years ago

    by VeinsofHate

    That just makes me want to cry. deep with emotion and full of pain