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by Lynn Anderson
Love Love Love it! Great use of words!
by Ingrid de Klerck
Well...it seems to me this lady is not treating you very well at all..I have no idea if this is a figurative speech or something more concrete..but it really struck me as intensely sad.
Good wording, though..you are a gifted writer.
ps: Sorry it took me so long to return the read, your poems are well worth it!
I can't quite tell if you loathe or love the "whip" - Perhaps a little of both? Either way, a compelling piece.
by Lost Soul 691
Oh, the interpretations that this poem creates in my mind! A wonderful read ... before bed. lol Maybe I better check out something light first. So many lines grabbed me but I do love "the dawn is my witness". :)