These were some very intense verses and held much meaning that the reader had to dig and think for. I felt like you fully gave yourself to this piece, like it was not just a half attempt but a true one. Although I may not have grasped the meaning behind each and every line, I could tell the brilliance you have penned, not to mention the feeling and sense of truth.

Excellenty written my friend, God bless!

~MaryAnne