Comments : I feel the ice beneath my feet....

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    As I read the words I could almost feel the bitter wind hitting me in the face, the cool crisp air almost as frozen as the ground. The imagery was excellent and I loved the way you worded so many of the stanzas.

    "like frozen footsteps in the snow.
    You can't tell who made them,
    but there they lay, like fading shadows"

    I thought that was amazing along with the entire poem 5/5 from me

  • 14 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    Three words W.O.W

    I love the visuals that I got from this poem I could almsot feel the wind whipping my hair and the coldness of the ice numbing my sikin

    My favortie lines were:
    Snow and ice sparkle with sunlight,
    like the diamonds in my wildest dreams.

    I love that picture

    5/5