This was really beautifully written. great job! my favorite line is: "We watch the stars fuse up in our sight, In the valley of maroon pearls, We settle into the night." good line. :)

Beautiful in every way

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This kind of poem reminds me of my style of writing & that poem "Ill Always Love You, Big Bro" was actually a song I made, not an official one, so to speak, but it's meant to be one.