wow! i read your profile thing and i realized you and i are a lot alike.... more than i thought.... we both write poetry for the same reason.... i hope that we can talk moer or something... if you could give me your email address ill write you.... dont reply to this in here... i wont remember to come back and read... write it in one of my poem's comments.... preferbly the top ones..... if you dont want to thats ok... i just thought itd be nice to talk to someone who understands how i feel and stuff.... well i loved the poem! i hope im as good as you someday....

The sun shines through,
Yet none touches it,
The bleak black within,
It all stays as dark as night,
Not seen from without,
No sun shines upon this,
It stays dark within,
A dark centre of hate,

That was a beautiful stanza. Very Very Sad! But so good. The whole poem was excellent! Keep up the great work. Get past these feelings your having! :(

Love,
Danielle