As always the flow a nd rhyme is perfect for my taste. The imagery took me to New York
The romance took me to disired beauty

Wow. That was beautiful. I have never been to New York and I don't know what skyscrapers look like...Only in pictures have I seen them...That was so outrageously beautiful. I just loved it one hundred percent. AMAZING!!!! definatly 5/5.......fravorites definatly...

Wow no offense but this was kinda cheesy i mean sweet but cheesy which alot me people like i do sometimes but there was great imagery and i little humor it kinda sounds like a hallmark card but its good no doubt 5/5

Aww... I love it! This poem is so beautiful! I'm especially attached to it since I'm a New Yorker myself <3 I was born there and i love New York so much. Really enjoyed your poem! The ending was surprising but made it even more beautiful!