Comments : They Call It A Breakdown

  • 14 years ago

    by Hologram

    I'm not God, but I'm trying
    My hardest to set yu free ...

    My only hope is that maybe one
    Day, yu'll feel no more pain.

    Great write, once again
    5/5
    x

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow...this is very powerful. I loved it. I think it was well written, didnt seem forced, it just flowed nicely and i liked that. Great write, keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow...this is very powerful. I loved it. I think it was well written, didnt seem forced, it just flowed nicely and i liked that. Great write, keep it up. 5/5