Good Idea... I wish it was possible. You lack a little bit of flow throughout. Good job though

suicidalkansas

I like your flow, it was very sad but i sense hope in those words. Great Job. 5/5

I like how short it was. It seemed like it just came from your heart, where poetry should come from.

You should check out my new one. "pouring raine"
lol its the complete opposite:)

Thank you guys for all the kind comments :)