Comments : How Cold It Is Alone

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Boldly original

    The deep line which I pondered the most was Feeding the lions with graves

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This situation is such a tough one to be in. Pretty Ironic because I'm in this situation myself right now...

    "Boldy Original" better words can describe this poem. I thought it was very original and I absolutely loved it! Your way of expressing your feelings is very unique which is hard to find anymore. I thought this was a great write!

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Forget about the boy in the corner
    With his knees to his head
    Don't think about how he feels
    Just leave him for dead
    - this stanza has a really awkward flow ..

    Other wise it flows nicely , and your imagery is very different but is effective . Well done , 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I liked this poem a lot. Its very raw and I can see how hard it must have been to pen such a piece.

    "He read your message in a bottle
    Figured everything on his own
    He didn't really realize
    How cold it is alone"

    ^ The stanza that spoke to me the most