Very good read, the take you have on death is intresting its alamost like shes stuck in limbo. my faovrite lines were:

No one was ever home,
so the time didn't matter,
she swallowed the pills
and heard the bottle shatter.

The part about the shattering bottle was good i could see how the glass was scattered on the floor.

I do think you could improve upon this poem though. for instance it seemed as if in some places it was a bit forced to find words to rhyme. never be afrade to turn from rhyme to proes and back to phyme in a poem.

I give it a 5/5 even the best works can take improvment though
keep on writing
~ Till then sweet dreams on the wings of a black Dove

It was a long piece and a good one too. It could do with some more fixing. It is true that one could not think they are worth something, but in another persons eyes they are worth more than anything to them. It was a good read. I enjoyed it.
WakingFreedom

Very good, one of my faves...kinda sad too

Wow, I Just Cried.. This Poem Deserves So Much.
I Can Relate, and Thats The Sad Thing.
5/5