Comments : Holding Back (Line Messaging)

  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow this is amazing, I have never seen one like this before it's very interesting. well done. xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Sylvia I really dont know where you found this form but I love it and thanks for introducing it. Youve brought forth a wonderful message through your words. Loved this.. it was great. Well done..

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Whoa..looks like an interesting form but sounds hard. But you have done well with
    this form! Well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Doesn't love mean sharing
    everything with that special person?

    ^^
    A true and sincere love is indeed that, Silvia.

    Such a sad poem..I really don't know what else to say..very sad.

    I have never seen this format, it looks very interesting:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Doesn't love mean sharing
    everything with that special person?

    *That's a good question...not sure how many people could answer truthfully. Anyways I really liked this piece. I'm gonna have to try it sometime soon. I love your message, a sad but true one. I think the message by itseld would be a good poem. I love and admire that you aren't afraid to try new ideas. Amazing poem. one I'm sure a lot of people can relate to. Nik*