Comments : Sunshine in the Autumn Rain

  • 14 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    I love it...unbelievably well written..great word choice and like the rhyming..keep it up..

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Beautifully written with emotions that shows how much you will protect this little love one. Thats the most essential thing in a child life "love'. I like the way you ended each stanza with "In the autumn rain." It blends well together and make your poem even more interesting. Very well done 5/5, kel.

  • 10 years ago

    by Amreen

    Lovely poem. Filled with great emotions and beautiful words:)

    Keep writing!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A nice little poem which has a happy
    rhythm to it and the rhymes have been chosen
    carefully to make this a pleasant read...nice write :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Bhavin

      Thank you so much, Meena ji. Your feedback is appreciated. More poems available on http://bhavinshah.in/igyp.html
      Do check them out when you get time. :)