That is how first love feels at FIRST, at least for me but mine ended badly :/ but yeah great work :]

Sweet :)

I admire anyone who looks for love in these times. I think it's great you found it.

I liked most of the words you chose for this poem, but it was a little hard to follow. Follow as in the story was all over and didn't exactly have a flow.

From an emotional stand point however, first love is one I'll never forget.

Thank u i appreciate your comment