Sometimes just a call or message or something from someone special to us really gives us the strength we need to live the next day ahead of us. Without their support where would we really be? They give us the hope we need to live each day...awesome job, this was wonderful & easy to relate to.

Nitin
Congrats on being one of the winners! I love the emotion you capture with your words. Awesome imagery and word choices. Your words paint such a picture for the reader. It feels like I'm standing right there.

Your eyes felt like home to me
Where I would have loved to live
Somehow here we are so far away
With too much pride to forgive

This stanza just reaches in and touches the heart. I love the line "Your eyes felt like home to me" What a beautiful statement. There is so much love in just that line.

Dear moon, if I could bring you down
Would you light this darkness inside
My heart has more scars than you
Feeling so alone, hear my cries

This is a wonderful stanza. To be feeling scared like the moon. The pain of not having that love with you. That you are crying out to the moon.

Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Beautiful, stunning write Nitin. Years may pass, but the memory of lovers keep haunting us, bringing all those memories back.
I personally loved this write. An easy unhesitant 5 from me.

The rhyme, the theme, all was mighty fine.

Beautiful, stunning write Nitin. Years may pass, but the memory of lovers keep haunting us, bringing all those memories back.
I personally loved this write. An easy unhesitant 5 from me.

The rhyme, the theme, all was mighty fine.

Nice job with the title contest and congrats for moving to next round. Many things happen in the still of the night, memories crowd in when you least expect them. Well done.

A fantastic write Nitin.. filled with emotions you have so well expressed. A deserved win in the contest. Loved it :)... Very well done!

Love which is lost is hard to forget for it gave
you so much strength & life while it was with
you...a sad situation that is penned very
nicely..take care.

When someone picks up a phone and call you it means that they are thinking of you, and sometimes that call comes at a time when we really need some one to talk to.
Your poem is absolutely beautiful my friend.Every word in each stanza speaks volume of a heart in pain which I find very sad.
I enjoy reading this piece.
Take care.
Paul...

A very well written piece. you hav captured the essence or lingering feelings and simply layed them out for the reader using great adjectives and imagery.
i like and can relate