"youd" should be "you'd".

"couldnt" should be "couldn't".

Otherwise this poem was very powerful for not being that long, and mainly it was original. I liked the whole idea you had going and I enjoyed reading your thoughts written down.

Thanks for sharing.

God bless you and Merry Christmas!

~MaryAnne

I can't help how they're spelt, spell checker changes my commas to squigly lines and such so I have to take them out. Thanks.