It was like listening to a mended heart tell the story of how it was once broken...you told the story beautifully!!!!

I really like this, even if the rhythm to it is a little erratic at times. It seems such a straightforward poem until the "Even if I stayed you'd still choose her" line. That gave it a much deeper emotional touch that frankly I wasn't expecting.

Ye this thing happened to me :? i stayed and he has chosen her...

Really really liked this! it was even better because i could relate to some parts of it, and just everything you have said is true...maybe it just wasnt meant to be! But that only means there is someone even better out there

This is my fav from those i hav read....many can feel same and ur opening stanza was so like revealing to the whole concept

Looking back at the past
We had something and
We thought it would last
But our fate had other plans
And that included us being apart

i mean how true this is..u knw no one knws what destiny hides for us

5/5