Comments : Bad Habits

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Addictions to anything, drugs, alcohol, love, can be deadly and they are extremely difficult to overcome. I can say this because I speak from experience.

  • 14 years ago

    by Second to None

    This was once me as well!

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Well done Nik...Amazing piece from you different from the previous ones..This poem shows the improvement..It just keeps getting better and better!

  • 14 years ago

    by SexLoveControlVanity

    That was a beautiful poem, i can relate

  • 14 years ago

    by Broken Masquerade

    I liked this. it was very relatable. i think the flow was a little off in some bits like in the stanza

    "I wanted to come down once
    but the drugs needed me to stay
    so here I was stuck in rewind
    brain so fried that I couldn't press play."
    that last line is a bit long i think and puts the reader off.

    apart from a few things like that it was really good. i always enjoy reading your poems 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Beautifully written. i liked this part as well: "I wanted to come down once
    but the drugs needed me to stay
    so here I was stuck in rewind
    brain so fried that I couldn't press play."
    great job and keep it up! :)