OMG >>>>GEEEE let me tell u 1st of all and out of subject why i realy loved this:
I have chess obsession ... and U REALLY REALLY used the moves the strategies in a fantastic way...

this was my best

Wait for checkmate? Or just give up?
Strategy failed, I ran out of luck
How will they remember The game I played?
Struggles endured, Prices paid

this was profound..am addin u to my favs..u have such a gr8 talent with words...and i was gna explode as i read more...but this one ?
BLEW ME OFF!!
relating things to chess is but brilliant..wen every move u make
might be a risk..or a change for the whole game

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5.5

I really like this :) my favorite part is "The game has been played. I cannot complain
Though it seems to have Ended in vain" . I think it's funny how we both named a poem check mate. i like how you used all the technical terms from chess.