Your kind of gift is priceless...it's clever and it's hurting me...5/5

Aww this is beautiful , sad and touching. Loved it Sylvia. Very original. Well done.

A write that holds deep sentiments which
touches the reader's heart..beautifully sad..

This was so sad, yet beautiful as everyone has said. What a unique piece, & quite effective I must say, almost made me cry. Awesome job.

Awwww.... I would do not leave that gift under the tree. After all that's the one gift I wish I had this year. Wonderful poem.

Sylvia, your first stanza described me this Christmas.
It's a time of the year where we celebrate the birth of our savior and should be joyous instaed of sad.But we are of the flesh and as such we do tend to get very emotional.
Yet, this piece is beautifully penned.
Take care.
Paul...