Mel

Great job on this form hun!!!

Normally I have a favorite part. A line or stanza that just jumps right out at me and sticks in my mind.
But with this piece I have 2.

Two whole stanzas !!!!!
The last two stanzas just swept my breath away.
Loved them ...

Wonderful read Mel. I am so proud of you for completing Rachel's challenge as I know it has taken you out of your comfort zone.
I am so so so proud of you hun !!!!

I think you did a really really wonderful job on this! And I enjoyed every single line you wrote though I have to admit your vocab can be higher than what I usually am able to comprehend. And the third stanza's my favourite, especially the line:
Monarch maiden misled magic,

It weaves this mystical aura to your poem. Keep on writing Mel! XD

Mel, it is always a joy to read your creative thoughts. Great word choice and nice job adhering to the rules of the form! Excellent!

Congrats Mel..XD

Congrats Mel ... so proud of you hun ~hugs~

Congrats. :]

A stunning piece!!! Great job for this!!!
God bless!!!

-Pink Butterfly-