Comments : Mindflow

  • 10 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    !!!!

    a-amazing.

  • 10 years ago

    by january friend

    Stare around your window pane, boarded, thrashed, blocking rain / Wonder why these trees don't talk, then ask your shoes to take a walk" i don't know why i love these lines so much, i guess it's the imagery maybe. the flow was very good. all of the lines, as random as they were, all tied together somehow. and i also love "A circle has no end at all." great poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by steve

    That is a deep and insightful poem! You made it flow very well. This poem can stir up several different emotions in one reading. "When nothing seems to fit in place it's only wise to think of space
    That's all we are, that's all we take aside from all the lies we make" That is my favorite line. Great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Cale

    Great write!!! The emotion and flow was amazing and very insightful!!! You have great talent!! 5/5!

  • 6 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow nicely written..very nicely I absolutely love the flow of this...and it content snd concept...you penned this well....your wordplay is fantasic...nice choice of words ..I can tell you put a lot of heart and thought into this poem

    Keep writing ...you're good at it

  • 2 years ago

    by Lost One

    A circle has no end at all.

    It doesn't happen often. Hasn't happened in a while... but you have blown my mind. I love a number of your poems but chose to comment on this one because THIS, is genius. Thank you, I have a feeling I will be coming back to this poem often.