Stare around your window pane, boarded, thrashed, blocking rain / Wonder why these trees don't talk, then ask your shoes to take a walk" i don't know why i love these lines so much, i guess it's the imagery maybe. the flow was very good. all of the lines, as random as they were, all tied together somehow. and i also love "A circle has no end at all." great poem!
That is a deep and insightful poem! You made it flow very well. This poem can stir up several different emotions in one reading. "When nothing seems to fit in place it's only wise to think of space
That's all we are, that's all we take aside from all the lies we make" That is my favorite line. Great job
Great write!!! The emotion and flow was amazing and very insightful!!! You have great talent!! 5/5!
6 years ago
by Wicked Ways
Wow nicely written..very nicely I absolutely love the flow of this...and it content snd concept...you penned this well....your wordplay is fantasic...nice choice of words ..I can tell you put a lot of heart and thought into this poem
It doesn't happen often. Hasn't happened in a while... but you have blown my mind. I love a number of your poems but chose to comment on this one because THIS, is genius. Thank you, I have a feeling I will be coming back to this poem often.