The past stays within me , and so I wish to flee,
Without realizing my escape does not free,
Myself from all the things that cannot be.

^^ i like that its true how we can flee our past.
i like this poems :]
keep writting
5/5
-Tania

My bad i ment canT flee oour past.

I love your poem!
reminded me of my boyfriend...don't know if thats a good thing or bad but GREAT poem. :D

5/5!

Thank you. i always think of the past, but i try not to let it get in the way.

and lol, it reminded me of mine too afterwards. but i didnt write it for him or about him. i wrote it because so many things are changing in my life now and im trying to keep up.

thank you for the postive comments.

Wow, this is very inspirational. I like your style, 5/5. Em

Past memories are good to have, a long as they don't hinder our future
:o)
enjoyed

Again very good write! I really can relate to what you said about the past and all.

Your rhyme was alright except in the very beginning with "head and head" at the end of both lines. Then towards the end the rhyming dissappeared by first rhyming each ending the same way, and then by end there wasnt any rhyming at all.
But Amazing poem!

Thank you. I'll try to keep that in mind when writing my poems next time.

Ah memories, they can be our worst nightmares or our most precious treasure. its how you view it and your outlook that effects how you see them.
nice poem
~Ben