Thanku so much Mel... Lol. I was feeling very melancholy today. Big hug for your sweet comment..:)
Love ya.

'But others thought you not good enough, they really couldn't see'
^You forgot were in between you & not.

'Yes, my heart it still remembers, all the little things we done'
^Done should be did...sorry for being grammatically correct. :x

What a beautiful write... I believe this very much. Our first love resides permenently in our hearts & will forever be with us no matter how much we may want to forget them. A really nice poem, awesome rhyme & a strong and truthful message to conclude. Wonderful job.

Hey There, long time :)

This is a lovely piece with so much innocence. I could feel the purity of words in this one. Nothing is forced and words just coming directly from heart. Loved it dear, beautiful write.

all the best and take care

....this brings back memories..first love are
always hard to forget or to let go. A touching
write that I'm sure many feel the same way.
Take care :)

Olwin
This brought tears to my eyes. I know somwtimes we think if only we had followed our heart. Beautiful poem. You will always have your memories. No one can take those from you.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Nicely penned, the feelings were conveyed quite well. +1 on the grammatical error, another option to fix it would be all the little things we have done :)

This poem is truly BEAUTIFUL! As I sit and read, my fill with tears because I can sense the joy and passion felt when this was written.....truly an amazing poem!

First love is an infatuation we've never experienced before, that quite often ends in a nightmare ... but if we're one of the lucky ones, a beautiful foundation to build upon
:o)
enjoyed